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269 No. 269 watch
Just because I love you guys, I'll repost both my stories :D



Oh thank God, it was over, she thought as she was lead from the podium, her body shaking as every nerve was released from its horrified paralysis. All those eyes staring at her, the rich and elite of society holding up their numbers as they made their bids on her body. She had been sold for 300,000 dollars, a high price, even for a virgin slave like her. She hadn?t even paid attention to who had won the bidding match. She had been too busy watching her younger brother in line behind her, his young face as pale and terrified as her own.

Roughly she was lead from the bidding room and into another where she was forced to her knees, her deep red hair spilling over her shoulders and covering her face as though trying to protect her from the fate it had doomed her to. It was no use though; she had been cursed from birth with the same red hair that ran through her father, brother and mother when she had been alive. It was a miracle they had managed to stay in hiding for as long as they did.

She heard a door slide smoothly open and flinched, kneeling so her forehead touched the cold marble floor. A hand roughly yanked her up by her hair and she glared tearfully at the man she now belonged to. ?Oh! She?s much prettier up close,? he said as he let go of her hair. He gently took her chin to wedge her mouth open, examining her teeth. ?Look good?? He pulled her to her feet and examined the muscles of her naked legs and thighs, moving to her bound arms next and grasping her breasts. ?She?s a bit underweight isn?t she?? he asked, ignoring how she snarled and writhed against his touches.

The slave dealer chuckled and said, ?Her and her sire and sibling have been in my cells for three weeks. They all have too much spirit for most of my customers.?

The man nodded and circled her like a hawk, examining her from every angle. She just eyed him warily, her tied and mottled hands clenching into fists behind her back. It was now that she was able to get a good look at the man. He had to be about nine or ten years older than her 17 and was tall and lean, his hair so black it looked almost blue under the softly glowing lights. His hard grey eyes examined her critically, causing her to shiver slightly. He had the eyes of a connoisseur.

?She seems to be in fine shape, other than a little on the thin side,? he said as he stopped his trek around her. He suddenly grabbed her shoulder, reaching a hand between her legs and pressing a finger into her. She snarled and tried to jerk herself away, but his hand was a vice on her shoulder. ?You say she?s a virgin?? he asked lightly and pumped his finger in and out a few times as he tested her clit with his thumb. She bit her lip, her tears streaming silently down her face as she glared death at the man.

?It?s guaranteed sir,? the slave dealer assured. ?She was checked as soon as she was brought to us.?

The man nodded, taking his finger away and wiping it on a handkerchief from his pocket. He reached into his suit coat and brought out a leather bound checkbook. ?300,000 was the agreement?? he confirmed as he wrote his check. ?And 250,000 for my other purchase as well??

?That is correct Mr. Nellis,? the dealer said with a pleasant smile. The dark haired man finished writing the check, signing it with a flourish before handing the paper over. The dealer took it with a bow of gratitude. ?Thank you for your patronage sir,? he said sincerely. ?Now would you like her to be transported to your estate??

The man thought for a moment before shaking his head. ?No, I think I will keep this one with me,? he said with a grin.

The dealer bowed again. ?As you wish sir. Then I will leave you with her,? he said before bowing himself out of the room, closing the door quietly behind him. She cringed, but didn?t react any other way, just kept her eyes downcast, staring at the marble floor.

?What is your name?? he asked suddenly as he surveyed the girl before him.

She swallowed thickly before answering, ?Samantha, but my family calls me Sam.?

?Well, Sam, do you know what has taken place here today?? he asked, voice light and condescending as though he was talking to an infant who couldn?t understand any better.

She bristled at his tone and snarled, ?I?ve been bought, like a piece of meat.?

?Exactly,? the man replied before he grabbed her chin roughly, her jaw creaking under the pressure of his strong fingers. ?And do you know what the means?? Sam glared at him, though her silence prompted him to continue. ?That means that you belong to me now. You are a ginger and are therefore suited for nothing more than to be a slave,? he said, still keeping his grip on her chin. ?You will obey me when I tell you to do something or you will be punished, is that understood?? He let go of her and waited for her answer.

She clenched her teeth, green eyes glaring and channeling every bit of hate she felt towards the man. ?Yes sir,? she replied, her voice barely above a growl.

He smiled at her, the look of it almost disarmingly charming, and such a stark difference from the stern and demanding tone he had just been using. ?Wonderful! Then we will have no problem,? he said, clapping his hands together happily.

Sam just bared her teeth, closing her eyes as he raised a hand. When no strike came, she opened an eye cautiously and saw that he was only taking off his jacket. He draped the long coat over her shoulders and said, ?I have clothes waiting for you at my apartment, but it?s still chilly outside.?

She quickly pulled the coat around her to cover her up as best as she could and jerked away from him when he tried to put his arm around her shoulder. He sighed and grabbed her hair, yanking her head up to look at him. ?Stop,? he said simply, voice hard. She let out a breath and felt her fight go with it as she stared into fathomable grey eyes. Without warning, he leaned in and caught her lips in a domineering kiss, covering her mouth with his. She opened her mouth to gasp and he took it to his advantage, swiping his tongue through her mouth, ravishing every part of it he could reach.

She weakly tried to push him away, but he cupped the back of her head, only bringing them closer, nibbling her lip as he finally pulled away. She looked at him as though he had struck her and was only rewarded with his smirk. ?That?s better,? he praised before putting his arm around her shoulder again. ?My name is Jonathan Nellis, but you will either call me ?master? or ?sir,? he said flatly, leaving no room for discussion. She followed him, pale as a ghost and silent as a shadow, terrified as to what awaited her. She glanced back at the door she had come in, realizing she would never see her father or her brother again.
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>> No. 9063
I have two questions.

What is going on with Anessa. At the beginning of the story she was a major character, and now, now she seems to just appear out of nowhere and do nothing special. She has like one line in the update, you should do a chapter on her just to explain what is going on, where she keps dissapearing to. I mean it may not be epic like the rest but it would at least let us out of the dark on her.

As for my second question... are you ever going to reveal who that lady is?
>> No. 9073
Hey OSoT, that action kicked ass, The other scenes are good too but I was wondering why is it that two of the main characters fight in arenas all the time, why don't we see that much action? I guess the simple way of saying it would be, MOAR ACTION PLZ. I almost shit myself in suspense.
>> No. 9085
>>9063
she is simply plotting revenge on everybody, nothing special but the death of Jonathon will come from it.
>> No. 9101
No shit >>9000

Seriously, if there are any publishers here you might want to look into giving OSotT a chance... Who knows? It might turn out to be a best-selling erotic-novel...

Keep up the good work, OSotT!
>> No. 9129
OSotT, this is an amazing story. Your writing is flowing and beautiful to read. I'm not a big Yaoi fan, but those scenes are few and far between. This is so much better than all the stuff I've read on AFF (Adult Fan Fiction), I think I'm gonna come here from now on. Just like a lot of other guys, I stopped fapping after a few chapters because the story was just so great and I didn't want to skip past anything important just to find fapping material. You've captivated me and now I want moar. So much MOAR. But I can wait. Take as long as you need.

Also, I've noticed a huge decrease in Anessa's appearance lately. I thought she was a bitch, sure, but her character was interesting. I'd like to see more of what's happening with her.

While I'm thinking about Anessa, I was wondering if you'd be ok with me writing a short story on what happened to Anessa while she was at Richard's house or mansion or whatever. I just wanted to see if it was ok with you first. It'd be kind of a test, because it'd be my first try at elit. Just let me know as soon as you can if it's ok.
>> No. 9145
Cheeze, it's nice you asked OSotT. I also respect you for that as many people (myself included) just made another Ginger story. If OSotT i look forard to reading it.
>> No. 9154
FUCK I'M AT THE END FUCK FUCK FUCK
>> No. 9162
>>9154 My thoughts exactly.
>> No. 9223
Another update, and a wonderful read as usual.

I don't care how long the next update takes, since they keep getting better and better, and still leaving the readers in suspense.

OSotT: Please take your time and write an update whenever you can, I'm sure the majority of your readers will be patient enough for the next update.
>> No. 9365
when does that other ginger from John's birthday party come in the story
>> No. 9403
MOARRRRRR!
>> No. 9423
The fuck happened to /elit/?

Everything's so... different.
>> No. 9430
Oh good it's not just me.

strange it is only for elit everything else is the same.
>> No. 9433
Sigh. If you all would bother to read the posts that i put up in the disscusion thread than you would know whats going on.
>> No. 9435
Sigh. If you all would bother to read the posts that i put up in the disscusion thread than you would know whats going on.
Yeah sorry about that. After I made the post I started looking for answers. I found people talking about it in the Discussion Thread.

I'll delete the post, if it makes you feel any better, Cowboy.
>> No. 9520
Requesting in this request thread F (milf),m
>> No. 9522
>>519

Lolwut?
>> No. 9526
nice
>> No. 9538
>>519

This isn't the request thread. What are you smoking and where can I get some?
>> No. 9593
What happened to this being stickied? Damn new look. Damn you Cowboy.

BUMP

OSotT, I changed my mind. I gave up on the Anessa thing. I'm just not twisted enough to imagine what Richard would do to Anessa. So I settled with writing a story in your Gingers universe.

Please reply soon if you get the chance.
>> No. 9641
BUMP
>> No. 9698
this should be on front page if not stickied. Why isn't it there?
>> No. 9705
Sticky sticky sticky.
>> No. 9712
GOD DAMNIT END OF PAGE

MOAR
>> No. 9732
been said already but, fucking amazing. been reading but first post and..... OHMAGODICANTWAITFORTHENEXTUPDATE!!!!!
>> No. 9775
grate
>> No. 9810
STICKY STICKY STICKY

and I'm glad /elit/ is back to the way it was. Pictures FTW
>> No. 9825
>>8801
could you kindly repost the original part of this story? i walked in on this half (part?) back in august 2008. so... yeah. i'm not lost cuz i read all thus far on this thread, but the backstory would be great.
>> No. 9837
>>9810

This story will not be stickyed again. I love only some of the time as much as the next anon. But this story has had its time to sit at that top and find a larger audiance. I am contimplating a "Watch this shit" sticky series in which good peices will be stickyed and feautred. Depends on how lazy i am as to weither or not i do it.

But I repeat. I WILL NOT STICKY THIS AGAIN. So stop asking.
>> No. 9839
Bump.
>> No. 9911
Usually i would bt statement but the only reason we wanted it stickied was because it was at the very end due to some weird (threads with a certain amount of posts are at the very end or whatever.) but since it has been fixed that is no longer the case. So if it isn't stickied i don't care, just a slong as it doesn't fall off the face of the earth again.
>> No. 9953
Bump.
>> No. 9987
WHEN are you going to updatr again!? It's just so amazing. My boyfriend is a redhead and I tease him all the time.
>> No. 9991
>>9593 Lol! Feel free Cheeze. It makes me sad to see the majority of the ginger fics gone, and I'd love to see another :P

And to everyone else, sorry for taking so long on this update. I have three papers and a speech to worry about in this next week, but after that I have the week of freedom that is Thanksgiving break. At the very latest, it'll be up by then. Thank you for your patience!
>> No. 10027
I would suggest putting the story in a pastebin, starting a new thread and linking to it. Since this thread is on autosage anyway.
>> No. 10061
actually you are wrong anon. Autosage is gone.

DAMNIT, i wish my MS word was working then i could wrte up my new story.
>> No. 10067
>>10061
use notepad
>> No. 10081
use wordpad
>> No. 10111
I've started thinking about writing my own story based on the ginger universe, but will probably never get around to writing anything. The basic plot is a guy tortures his ginger so bad that she kills herself. Then he becomes the opposite of that. Also, I would like to here more about those protesters and other stuff that advances the plot.
>> No. 10162
bump
>> No. 10168
zomg bump
>> No. 10223
I've been reading this for a while now and I must say I've been addicted to it lol
Very good story!
>> No. 10241
>>9825
doing this is important.
DO WANT BACKSTORY
>> No. 10246
Alright, so someone pointed out that I forgot the second chapter of this story, and they are right. I totally forgot about it until now, so here's the repost. This isn't a new chapter, so don't get your hopes up, but a new update is on the way, slowly but surely. Anyway, this takes places right after >>269 or the very first part of this story. Sorry if this is confusing, I wish I could go and like... re embed it in the right place, but I doubt that'll work. Anyway, here's the long lost part two!


Sam gaped as she looked up at the building that towered over them like some glowing-eyed monster and her bare feet were numb as they stood on the light sprinkling of snow that frosted the pavement. "Hurry up!" Jonathan snapped and hurried her through the door of the apartment and ushered her into the elevator. "You'll catch your death before I even get my money's worth out of you."

She growled at him, but was grateful for the warmth of the building, her entire body feeling numb. Realization of what her life had become was fighting to settle in her mind, but she refused to let it, allowing her to stay in the comforting numbness. Jonathan pressed the button for the 57th floor, the very highest number and her stomach lurched as the box started to move upward quickly. Such things as elevators and automatic doors were completely alien to the girl who had spent her entire 17 years in hiding.

Oblivious to her unease, he gripped her shoulder and led her out of the elevator after the doors finally opened. She looked around at the high, gilded ceilings in awe, the extravagance of the place more than anything she had ever experienced, yet her mouth dropped open when he typed in the pass code to the one of two doors on the length of the hallway. She was looking at a wall of glass that overlooked the entire city, the lights twinkling through the lightly falling snow. Comfortable leather furniture decorated the room and a fireplace was crackling loudly while a large HD television sat just beside it. The room seemed to ooze class and shouted of a lifestyle she knew nothing about. Doors branched off from the one she saw and she realized that this was only the beginning of the pent house apartment.

"Go sit by the fire," he ordered as pulled his coat off her shoulders and hung it on the polished oak coat rack next to a few hats.

Sam wasn't about to argue and rushed over to it, feeling the warmth bathe over her like water. She almost moaned in relief and scooted as close to the brick hearth as she could, almost feeling embers jump out to graze her skin. She flexed her numb hands, struggling to get the feeling back in them through the ropes were cutting into her wrists that had been put on for "safe transportation."

Jonathan looked over at her and sighed, brining out a small knife from his pocket. Sam looked up and all she saw was the naked blade in his hand as he advanced on her. She gave a fearful cry and ducked away from him only to lose her balance and land on her shoulder, jarring it horribly. "Calm down!" he snapped irritably and flipped her over onto her stomach before cutting the ropes away. Sam whimpered as the fibers of the rope stuck to the wounds on her wrists and heard him tsk his disapproval. He threw them aside and rubbed the palms of her hands to help get the blood flowing again.

"Stay here," he said shortly before walking into the attached kitchen and rummaged through a few drawers before he found what he was looking for. Sam didn't dare move, her heart still pounding against her chest as she listened to his movements. He returned with a damp washcloth and a small first aid kit before kneeling down beside her again. He cleaned her wrists quickly but thoroughly, ignoring her hiss of pain as he covered the area in a stinging antibiotic ointment. He wrapped her wrists in gauze and ordered simply, "Do not pick at that. Those bandages aren't coming off until I say so, understand?"

"Y-yes sir," she muttered quietly, still lying against the ground, her body trembling fearfully. She wasn't about to make a break for it with him still kneeling right beside her. Suddenly, she felt a cold piece of leather encircle her neck and snarled, jerking away from him to see the black collar in his hands. His eyes narrowed and he gripped her hair, yanking her back towards him roughly before he snapped the collar around her neck, making sure it couldn't slip off but wouldn't choke her either.

"And you will not take that off either or I will glue it so it will never come off," he warned her, raising an eyebrow as though daring her to protest. She flinched under his gaze and nodded mutely, crawling closer to the fire again, finding an odd comfort in its warmth. It was almost as good as wearing clothes, she decided. He snorted before packing up his first aid kit and disappearing into the kitchen again.

Sam waited with baited breath, expecting him to appear around the corner again and dared to feel a bit of relief when he didn't. She sat up cautiously, her green eyes settling on the door they had come in through. There was his long coat and a hat hanging from the rack and a plan already began to form in her head. Her head jerked around when she heard laughter and saw him leaning against the marble kitchen counter, an amused smirk on his face. "Oh so now you're thinking of escaping now are you?" he asked condescendingly.

Her anger bubbled up inside of her and erupted before she could stop herself. "Fuck you," she hissed, green eyes flashing dangerously.

He raised an eyebrow at her and said lightly, in that same annoyingly condescending voice, "Language there ginger snap."

For some reason that sent her over the edge, causing her anger bubbling over into rage. She picked up the knife he had used to cut her wrists free and threw it at him with all the strength her drained body could muster. He didn't so much as flinch as the blade embedded itself in the drywall next to his head. Without warning he walked towards her, grabbing the knife from the wall as he did. Her eyes widened as she realized exactly what she had done and backed away from him, eyes welded to the knife in his hand.

She gave a terrified cry as she backed into the wall, unable to retreat any further. The man knelt down in front of her, pressing his knee between her legs and the knife up against her throat. "That was a very bad idea," he said, voice dangerous.

"I-I'm sorry, Oh God, I didn't mean to I-I-I just..." she couldn't even finish her sentence, gasping as she felt the knife press closer to her neck. She closed her eyes, tears streaming out from behind them as she felt his hand rove down her side before moving in-between her legs, spreading her outer lips with his fingers.

"I should beat you and sell you to the mating kennels for even trying that," he hissed into her ear as he pushing a single finger into her tight pussy. She gave a choked off gasp, her tears coming faster now. "But fortunately for you, I've trained more disobedient gingers, and I will not fail on you," he hissed and pressed a second finger into her, pumping them in and out and feeling her juices flow over them. He pulled them back out and licked them clean, a smile playing across his face. He kissed her forehead gently before licking away her stream of tears. "Calm down," he whispered, his voice changing to a tone that could be considered comforting as he tossed the knife aside.

Her shoulders were hitching with quiet sobs. Oh God, she had never been so scared in her life. She kept her eyes shut tight so she didn't see him undo his pants, taking out his cock and positioning it between her legs. "This is part one of your training," he whispered before thrusting into her, feeling the tight membrane break. Sam cried out, her tears only flowing stronger as a bit of blood trickled from her.

Jonathan stroked her face, making quiet comforting noises though they fell on her deaf ears as she blocked herself off from what was happening. He laid her down and began to thrust into her steadily, groaning at the tightness. Oh God, there was nothing like breaking a cherry on one this young. He reached down to finger her clit gently, knowing that this would be hard for her at first though with his training, it would get better with time.

He continued his assault, watching her sobs only grow as her body betrayed her, sending disgusting pangs of pleasure through her body. She gave a hoarse cry as her muscles tightened and twitched around him before he came as well, shooting his cum deep inside of her pure, unsoiled body. He pulled out with a groan and frowned as she curled up into a tight ball, hugging her shoulders as she cried.

He sighed and picked her up like the child she was before carefully taking her to another room of the apartment with a large Jacuzzi style bathtub and open, marble tiled shower. He carried her into the shower and turned on the water, feeling it caress his shoulders as he washed her gently, bringing up a soft cloth the clean her.

She hid her face against his chest, her body still shaking though Jonathan couldn't tell if she was crying anymore or not. Gently he dried the beading water from her pale skin before carrying her to the room he had arranged for her and laid her tense form down in the comfortable bed. He tucked the blankets in around her before pushing two painkillers into her mouth, holding her pale lips and nose closed until she swallowed.

As soon as he let go of her she curled up into a small ball and pulled the blankets tightly around her, feeling as though they were her only protection. He sighed and leaned down to kiss her forehead, seeing her flinch and trying his best to ignore it. "Goodnight Sam," he said quietly as he went to her door and wasn't surprised when he didn't get a reply. He locked the door before closing it and heading to his own room.

The first night was always the worst.
>> No. 10250
Very nice. I look forward to the next update.
>> No. 10262
If it matters at all, I'd love to see another scene with the stockades in the men's room. That was so hot, I came plasma.
>> No. 10299
Whoa, shit. OsotT when i wrote about Josh's Loft (In my story) I didn't even rember John living in a loft himself.
>> No. 10362
bump
>> No. 10369
bump the world must read the ginger story in all it's glory
>> No. 10441
bump!
waiting waiting
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